Plural problems
Reader SN writes:
One of my students has just received extensive comments on a MS. Some were extremely helpful, others less so. Two in the latter category were:
The plural of behaviour is not necessary.
The term ‘variation’ subsumes the plural. Eliminate the ‘s’ here and throughout.
“Behaviours” troubled me the first few times I came across it, but I am now happy that there is a difference between saying an animal shows a range of behaviour and saying it has a range of behaviours. I had never come across this attitude to variation though. Do you think Elgar was aware of his solecism when he named his "Variations on an Original Theme for Orchestra ("Enigma”)",?
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