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British headline-syntax example of the week: "Sheffield deaths: House murders accused mother in court", BBC News 5/27/2019.
The link was sent in by H. Kepponen, who notes that
the story is not about a domestic residence killing a woman inside a courtroom with malice aforethought, but about a mother who has been charged with murdering two of her children in a house … and who was brought to court today.
The obligatory screenshot:
[h/t H. Kepponen]
Victor Mair said,
May 27, 2019 @ 12:18 pm
It is bad enough without the "accused" stuck in there between "murders" and "mother". Nonetheless, after puzzling over it for a couple of seconds, I figured out what they were trying to say. Geez!
Shihchuan said,
May 27, 2019 @ 12:53 pm
And it just so happened that I saw this title while watching 'House'. That was low even for you, Greg!
Jen in Edinburgh said,
May 27, 2019 @ 1:11 pm
I'm not sure that's grammatical even in headlinese!
'Accused house murders mother' might be slightly better, but does suggest the house is a repeat offender…
cameron said,
May 27, 2019 @ 1:42 pm
So, if you murder your children in a house, you're not a child murderer, but a house murderer.
The house detail seems like very much the wrong one to focus on.
Barrie England said,
May 27, 2019 @ 1:56 pm
You forget that many readers will already be familiar with the story and will interpret the headline accordingly.
Jamie said,
May 27, 2019 @ 1:57 pm
@cameron I guess that "house murders" is used because, initially, there was a lot of mystery about what had happened and it was just described as an incident, and then deaths, "at a house".
The home page headline now reads "Mother in court charged with house murders" which is only slightly better.
Jamie said,
May 27, 2019 @ 1:59 pm
@Barrie England Indeed. I would have skimmed over it (perhaps subconsciously reordering the words) without really noticing the bizarre grammar.
DRM said,
May 27, 2019 @ 2:16 pm
As the BBC is not space-limited by the technology of paper publishing in any edition, it has no excuse for this sort of headline idiocy. it's barely longer and far clearer to say:
Sheffield deaths: Mother accused in 'house murders' in court.
Gregory Kusnick said,
May 27, 2019 @ 2:30 pm
Should we infer that most murders in Sheffield happen outdoors?
Ray said,
May 27, 2019 @ 4:43 pm
or
Sheffield house murders: Accused mother in court
Viseguy said,
May 27, 2019 @ 6:22 pm
House Murder Mother Headline Murders Headline English: English? (Yes!)
Bill Burns said,
May 27, 2019 @ 7:20 pm
On a related note:
https://nbcpalmsprings.com/2017/01/27/palm-springs-police-murder-suspect-in-court/
JPL said,
May 28, 2019 @ 3:48 am
I think it's fine the way it is. I don't know why anybody (incl. BBC) would want to "improve" on it. Although perhaps you could take out the "Sheffield deaths" and make it, "Sheffield house murders accused mother in court". You might also have a cartoon illustrating the favoured interpretation.
IMarvinTPA said,
May 28, 2019 @ 8:59 am
I thought it was some sort of political murder involving somebody in a House of parliment or some such. Yet another option.
Ralph Hickok said,
May 28, 2019 @ 4:34 pm
Is murder that occurs in a house really so unusual that it identifies this crime for readers who are following the case?
I could understand if it were, say, a warehouse murder or a clearinghouse murder or a slaughterhouse murder, but simply "house murder" seems very indefinite to me.
chris said,
May 29, 2019 @ 6:06 pm
@Bill Burns: Shocking for the police, of all people, to murder someone right there in court, with all those witnesses.
Andrew Usher said,
May 29, 2019 @ 10:54 pm
I guess that shows the Brits don't have a monopoly on garbled headlinese. But seriously, doesn't _anyone_ outside the story read headlines before they go out. You'd think that would be elementary and consume almost no time.
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Rodger C said,
June 1, 2019 @ 10:43 am
House murders mother! Vitas inuleo!